patience作文？中考英语作文

一、英语作文

学生写作能力较差的第一个层面表现在词汇贫乏、句子结构错误、中式表达等。因此首先要在句式的基础训练上下功夫，做到句子结构准确，表达无误，并培养自己一句多译的能力，进行不同句式结构表达训练。

同学们可以在表达多样化上有所提升，突破单一句式，使文章生动活泼、结构紧凑。比如可以学会运用以下表达方式：

1.使用非谓语动词形式

用非谓语动词可以使句子简洁。例如：

We were surrounded by a variety of buildings. We found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park and we felt joyful.

→Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply absorbed in the sight. After the visit, we left the park feeling joyful.

2.使用with的复合结构

with的复合结构,也就是独立主格结构,常作伴随状语以增加被描绘内容的生动性，使文章读起来更简洁明了。

例如：

I could not go on studying because there was so much noise troubling me.

→I could not go on studying with so much noise troubling me.（2004广东卷）

3.使用复合句

复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。例如：

① Occasions are quite rare when I have the time to spend a day with my kids.（2008山东卷）

② It is our belief that improvements in environment will contribute to the development of our society.

③ Additionally, as the data shows, there are roughly 350 million smokers in China, 75% of which are males while 25% are females. What amazes us is that around 540 million people are affected by second hand smoke.（2010广东高考考场作文）

4.使用倒装句，强调句，虚拟语气等

使用这些句式可使文章化平淡为生动，加强语气，使评卷老师感受到作者的强烈情感。

He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.

→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.（强调句）

→Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.（倒装句）

综合使用以上句式，长短句结合，可以增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

要写出好的文章，词句的积累非常重要。恰当地运用一些常用的习惯表达和典型句式既能有效地减少文章中的病句，又能给文章添彩。

对课文中出现的佳句，同学们可以进行摘录。笔者创编了下面的几个句子，同学们可以先口头后书面练习：

①帮助他学习数学，对我来说也是一个显摆自己的机会。

Here was a chance for me to distinguish myself by helping him learn maths.

（练习表达distinguish oneself）

②虽然做好了失败的准备，我仍然感到伤心并决定抓住每一分钟更加努力提高我的英语。

Prepared for the failure， I still felt upset and decided to work even harder to seize every minute to improve my English.

（练习过去分词作状语；表达seize every minute to do sth.）

③被她的耐心所感动，我对自己的粗鲁行为感到尴尬并决定学做有耐心的人，这有助于我与同学、朋友和父母很好地相处。

Moved by her patience, I felt embarrassed for my rude behavior and decided to learn to be a patient person, which helps me get along well with my classmates, my friends and my parents.

（练习过去分词作状语；定语从句的用法）

④只有把竞争和合作相联合，才能有助于我们达到目标并满足自身需求。

Only when competition combines with cooperation can it help in obtaining our goals and satisfying our needs.

（练习倒装句；表达obtain one?蒺s goal, satisfy one?蒺s needs）

这样，一些好词、好的表达、好的句式，经过反复的语言实践后，已经“内化”成自己的东西，用时自然“轻车熟路”。

高中生在日常英语写作中，最大的问题是词汇量不足，想表达某种意思，但“茶壶倒饺子”，表达不出来，大脑一片空白，绞尽脑汁拼命“挤出”几个单词和几个简单的句子，还有可能词不达意或表达不得体，这与平时不重视词汇积累有关。

作为高二的学生，虽然已经积累了一定的词汇，但还是感觉到平时记的词到了写作文的时候记不起来，不会用。这主要是因为平时记的一些单词，可能是孤立地记的，没有运用，还没有“内化”成自己随时可用的“有效词汇”。

解决这个问题有两条途径。

第一条途径是积极、大量、用心地阅读，在阅读中体验鲜活词汇的用法，看多了，自然就在脑海中留下了“痕迹”，到写作时，这些词汇就会“信手拈来”。阅读和写作是互相促进、相辅相成的。有些词汇和句型，只有通过广泛的阅读才能把它们运用得更熟练，表达得更准确。反过来，这也可以有效地提高我们的阅读理解能力。哪怕是平时做的阅读理解题，做完之后也可以把那些好词、好的表达摘录下来并熟记；遇见好的文章，把它们按照不同体裁和主题整理出来，如果有二三十篇不同类型的好文章烂熟于胸，自然会对写作会有所帮助。

第二条途径就是记语块。语块就是一些能表达一定意义的语料。实际上，学生在写作的时候，最主要的还是不会表达，“肚里没料”。平时不能孤立地记单词，应该记表达。比如关于A Healthy Life这一话题，同学们可以整理并创编以下语块：

①我长寿而且精力充沛，要归功于我的健康生活 my long and active life must be due to the healthy life

②年纪大了仍然很活跃remain active even in old age

③更注重健康饮食的重要性pay more attention to the importance of a healthy diet

④随着对……更深入的了解with a better understanding of...

⑤当代社会的主要趋势the major trends in contemporary society

这些语块在一定的情景中，适当地组合起来，就可以写出一段好文章。

一篇文章是由若干个段落组成的。把段落写好了，写作文就有了良好的基础，进步也更快。一个段落，要注意其单一性和连贯性。一段文章应该只说明一个问题，或一个问题的某一方面。为了写好段落，通常的写法是：在一段的开头用一句话点出本段的中心意思，即“主题句”，然后用几句来证明、解释或发挥这个中心意思，最后再用一句把本段的意思小结一下。

还要注意写好每一个句子。比如，要把句子写完整；同样的意思可用一句话表达的，就不要再添上两三句话来反复说明凑字数；句与句之间在逻辑上要连贯；文段中的句式应该长短结合、错落有致。

常见的练习写作的形式有：

①看图说话/写话

新课标的教材图文并茂，为看图说话的练习提供了丰富的素材，可充分利用。比如已知话题Women of Achievements时，可根据自己所了解的有关宋庆龄的情况，作出如下叙述：

Song Qingling was considered to be one of the greatest women in the world. She married Dr. Sun Zhongshan in 1915. She was the vice president of the People?蒺s Republic of China for many years. The impression she makes on me is that she has made so great contributions to the Chinese revolution that all Chinese people love her.

这样的叙述话语不要求太多，能够抓住重点，正确运用习惯表达即可。

②缩写

缩写是在保留原文体裁、题材、主要内容、结构顺序、人称角度等的前提下概括原文内容。缩写课文一般应该用自己的话来写，不能只停留在拼凑原文的词句上，也不要逐句、逐段照原文去改写。

③仿写

仿写既可以降低写作难度，又可以学以致用。当同学们掌握了对地理位置的描述，对气候、环境、资源、历史以及人口、风俗习惯的描写，学会了对有关国家、城市、旅游景点描写的写作方法，就可以仿写自己所熟悉的某个城市的概况，并以一个导游的身份介绍给外宾。

④评写

关于某一话题同学们可以详细地陈述赞同与反对两方面的观点及理由。

⑤串写

给出每个自然段的主题句，顺着主题句把文段写完。比如：

（1） With the development of science and technology, China is facing a lot of problems with the environment...

（2） The city of Guangzhou lies in the south of China, which is famous as a commercial center and green city. But in my view the environment...

（3） As a native of Guangzhou, I am concerned about the environment here very much. I have thought of a plan to make our city more beautiful...

⑥练习写周记、日记

这是培养学生英语自由写作能力的第一步。写周记、日记，学生不受内容和经验的限制，可就熟悉的题材，充分发挥自己的想象力，自由表达。但是写日记、周记要有事可记、有话可写。

总之，要提高自己的英语写作水平，首先要有积累；其次要自主、自觉地长期练习；还要读写结合，多渠道地努力。

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二、中考英语作文***要忍耐***to***be***patient***

when someone disagrees with you or offends you, don’t lose your temper. why? because it is of no use to do so. you ought to(should) be patient and keep calm lest you should quarrel with him. you must know that patience is not cowardice, but a virtue. i hope that everybody practices it.

in addition, patience will also bring us success. when you meet with difficulties in your work, it is no use losing heart. you must keep on fighting until(till) the final victory belongs to you.

"要忍耐"英语作文译文:

当有人和你意见不同或开罪你的时候，你切不可发脾气。为什么?因为这样做是无用的(用of no use)。你应当忍耐并且保持冷静，唯恐和他争吵。你必须知道忍耐不是弱而是一种美德。我希望人人都实行它。

另外，忍耐也会带给我们成功。当你在工作中遭遇到困难的时候，灰心是无用的。你必须继续作战直到最后胜利属于你为止。

三、请各位评一评我的作文

Dear Peter

How are you? I haven’t seen you for a long time. I miss you a lot! Hope you're doing fine. Well

I've just finished an exam yesterday

so it's now time for me to relax. Like last year

I will join a sport camp again. But this time

the camp is a bit different from that I joined last year. The o-week-long camp this time provides more ways to learn English. For example

one could learn real English through playing sports there

such as running

high jump

cycling and hiking. I know you like sports and English. So

I think you will love it and would like to invite you to join me. Joining summer sport camps is an amazing experience. As I joined a summer sport camp last year

perhaps I can tell you my experience there so that you can have more information in mind before deciding whether to join me or not. Last year

before joining the camp

I knew I would be participating in my school's high jump petition three months after the camp. So I decided to join the camp to train myself for the petition. In the camp

I met many great people. One of them was Tony

a friendly guy from Britain talented in every kind of sports. I asked him how to do better in the petition and he explained patiently to me the things I should pay attention to in preparing for the petition. I really learned a lot about sports

as well as English

from him. Another person I met is Andy

a very handsome guy as talented as Tony in sports. Sometimes

Andy would share with me about the basic skills in sports

which I find very useful

as they not only prepared me well physically and mentally for the camp

but also the petitions. Andy also taught me cycling which was totally new to me. Before that

despite my endeavours

I could not learn cycling well. However

Andy was very patient and practised cycling with me to give me encouragement. Finally

thanks to Andy

I learned cycling! 2013-07-06 17:43:43补充：之后请看意见 2013-07-06 17:44:26补充： So you see

joining a sport camp would let you meet many talented athletes. I heard that you were doing some sports training. So maybe it would be good for you to join the sport camp this summer with me- you can get much good advice from others. The activities in the camp were also both exciting 2013-07-06 17:45:15补充： and meaningful. Say

there was a relay race in which every group was striving to win. It gave me a good chance to enhance my persistence and group cooperation skills. Moreover

in the camp

I had to wake up early and washed my clothes

providing me an opportunity to boost my self-management skills. 2013-07-06 17:45:45补充： In fact

after the camp

I found myself more hardworking and not giving up as easily as before. I was even praised by my sports teacher at school for that. You could learn loads of things that are equally useful in and outside sports. After the summer

we would graduate and might work soon. Therefo 2013-07-06 17:46:08补充： re

why not join the camp this summer to give yourself a chance to better equip yourself for those? The summer holiday is very long. It would be deadly boring to stay home and review homework all the time. Joining the camp could give you a chance to relax

which may even help your study. In short

2013-07-06 17:46:32补充： the sport camp could widen your horizon

and allow you to make more friends

learn different things like sports skills

being self-disciplined

and of course

English. You would surely benefit a lot from the camp. Hope that my experience would be useful for you in deciding whether to join me or not 2013-07-06 17:47:18补充： I'm really looking forward to participating in the sport camp this summer with you. But anyway

don't feel pressured to join me if you can't really join the camp. I would respect your decision. Have a good summer

and write back soon! Best wishes

Candy 2013-07-06 17:54:32补充：内容尚算齐全，但你漏了在你的经历中提及「学英文」。组织和过渡还需要努力，中间的条理颇为乱（所以改了很多）。我差点以为 Tony是 sports teacher，最好讲清楚一点，描写略嫌未够仔细。结尾不够圆满。还有，不需要 title。 2013-07-07 02:47:35补充：其实 running跟 high jump分别是指「跑步」和「跳高」两种运动。 Running是个 gerund，可当成一般的 noun用；而high jump则是一般的 noun。它们不是动词哦，在这句中只是作为sports的例子，以举例有甚么 sports可玩来学英文。 2013-07-07 19:26:17补充：跑步的动词：普通的 run。跳高的动词：high jump，用法其实跟 jump这个普通的动词一样，只是前面加了 high来表示跳高。 2013-07-08 02:43:44补充：不过 high jump这个动词感觉有点不 formal，英文中其实没有一个动词是直接指跳高的。 2013-08-12 21:18:05补充：用 you其实文法上没错的。用 yourself主要是因为语气问题，you是指「你」、yourself是指「你自己」，因此用 yourself就听起来比较「人性化，有感情一点」

To望月一都 Therefore

why not join the camp this summer to give yourself a chance to better equip yourself for those?其实yourself可否用you来代替呢? 2013-08-07 17:56:10补充：系第一个yourself

---"Learning English Sports Communication"---should be"The sports camp(2012).---- email:-How are you? Hanen't see you for a long time. I miss you a lot. Doing fine.--I had finished exam. one day ago-the time to relax. I'll join another sports camp soon. This camp provides more approach for me to learn English; sports for running

high jump

cycling and hiking. I know you like sport and English; so I think you'll love to join me!--I havejoined summer sport camp once(=for 1 time.)Behaving perfectly well

sport teacher praised me for hardworking and not to give up easily. Let's recollect last summer camp. When teacher called us to do high jump

the performance by Tony on running and high-jump were very fast and high.--I shall have been participating high jump petition in intra-school 3 months later since one year ago.(OR:- One year ago

I knew I would be participating in the intra-school high jump petition 3 months later.)--Andy's sport skill was worthwhile to learn.Joining the camp had made me perfect both in physical and mental.--At the relay race petition

I had to run fast enough to win.It gave me a good training not to give up in group co-operation. A cycling training being difficult

I failed because my spirit willing

my flesh weaken. After teaching cycling by Andy

I learned due to good behaviour on persistence and patience.--(This 2013-2014 yr. summer camp will also provide these games too for Peter.Putting the sentence here would be illogical?)-- I have learned self-discipline for o weeks. After getting up early

washing clothes

joining the assemble groups

I was perpared to face my future job with confidence and faith.--Staying at home reviewing homework would be boring.Joining activity can widen my horizon

make more friends

learning sport skills

training self-discipline for my future job

and English.However you'll learnt more!---An email please.

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